Monday, April 29, 2013


Hits and Misses:

Hits:
·      Literary Analysis: I felt like I did a good job answering the question and I really enjoyed writing down all my memories of my favorite books and reading them with my family.
·      FINAL World War 2 paper (research paper): Well worded, stayed on topic, and well written. I enjoyed learning about all the things that World War 2 effected that I did not know about
·      Literary Narrative: Good word choice, stayed on topic, answered question well.   I liked writing about the short story.  I felt like I learned a lot about short stories and look at them in a completely new way now. 

Misses:
·      The first (turned in draft) World War 2 paper: didn’t stay on topic, not formal enough, bad sentence fluency, bad word choice, bad formatting.  I had the facts right, but the way I worded them and the way I cited the information was completely wrong.
·      The Blog post where we had to be a character from Nervous Conditions: I think that I didn’t really do a good job on this post.  I missed the main point of it and I did not write it very well.  I felt like this didn’t help me at all in terms of understanding the book. 

Not very many misses- I really enjoyed what I wrote about throughout the year and made good grades on all my major writing pieces.  

1 comment:

  1. Overall, your portfolio is great! I love your writing remix. You're hits and misses make sense. I feel like it would be natural to NOT like a first piece of work, but then like the revised final draft. Great portfolio!

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