Hits and Misses:
Hits:
· Literary Analysis: I felt like I did a good job
answering the question and I really enjoyed writing down all my memories of my
favorite books and reading them with my family.
· FINAL World War 2 paper (research paper): Well
worded, stayed on topic, and well written. I enjoyed learning about all the
things that World War 2 effected that I did not know about
· Literary Narrative: Good word choice, stayed on
topic, answered question well. I liked
writing about the short story. I felt like
I learned a lot about short stories and look at them in a completely new way
now.
Misses:
· The first (turned in draft) World War 2 paper: didn’t
stay on topic, not formal enough, bad sentence fluency, bad word choice, bad
formatting. I had the facts right, but
the way I worded them and the way I cited the information was completely wrong.
· The Blog post where we had to be a character from
Nervous Conditions: I think that I didn’t really do a good job on this
post. I missed the main point of it and
I did not write it very well. I felt
like this didn’t help me at all in terms of understanding the book.
Not
very many misses- I really enjoyed what I wrote about throughout the year and
made good grades on all my major writing pieces.
Overall, your portfolio is great! I love your writing remix. You're hits and misses make sense. I feel like it would be natural to NOT like a first piece of work, but then like the revised final draft. Great portfolio!
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