The paper that I am going to rewrite is going to be the literary analysis. I wrote about my history as a reader and how i have developed as a reader over time. I think that this paper was good, but that it could be written even better. I am going to correct my ideas mainly, and strengthen my word choice. I know that if I do this, my paper will become much better.
In the comments on this paper, they were mainly focused on my ideas and how the paper name and assignment was not as focused on in my paper as it should have been. I think that I had a lot of good things in my paper, just not the correct ones. I am going to correct this by putting in the correct information that is actually required. I am going to correct and strengthen my word choice by putting in more descriptive and words that are not so repetitive. I know that by the time that I am done, my paper will be fully developed and much better than it originally was.
I have to re-focus on my ideas too. I was super confused by the whole process and didn't really get very far in my brainstorming before I had to write.... so everything was terrible. Goodluck on your paper!
ReplyDeleteAimee Claire, just to clarify, you are revising the literacy narrative, right? I think that's a good candidate for revision, and I look forward to reading your next version. Please see me if you have any questions about how to approach it.
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